Page Update

Nearly there. I see flaws everywhere but at least it's getting done:

Still debating that last panel. I want to change it (again). As you can see I changed the lower tier from the original pencils from the previous post. Just need to keep telling myself I'll get better with each page. I've already planned the next short story after this 4 pager is done. And I have an idea of what I'd like to do after that.